care not for the world
for it never will understand u
like the rivers, the mountains, the trees
they could care less for the world
u walk alone
the path you choose
the world a mere spectator
careful do not let it
do not let inspiration die
for it will mean
u let the world get u
Sphota 
Narendra
October 24, 2009
yes the world is a mere spectator…eager to behave critic :(nice..PS:pls pls allow WP bloggers to comment too..i hate to drop my link…But i have to š¦ :Phttp://frozenwell.wordpress.com
divsi
October 25, 2009
beauty! the harsh truth n fact of life…:) its yr journey u ve got to fight it alone…:))kip writin harsha! loved this short crisp n meaningful poem!
Harsha Chittar
October 26, 2009
@Narendra: Open ID enabled, and thank you for liking the poem.@divsi: Thank you very much, will try to keep writing. š
Nethra
October 26, 2009
Hey, it was nice.Cheers š
pulkits
October 28, 2009
beautiful!! š